Many students have trouble when writing in English and do not write in
paragraphs. It is very important to write in paragraphs as that is the
normal, correct method of writing. It is also easier to read. Finally
if your writing is organized in paragraphs it will be more organized.
Below is an example of poor student writing.
My name is Kim Chul Soo. My major is Electronic Engineering. There are four people in my family. My father, my mother, my sister and me. I like basketball, soccor, and playing starcraft. I live in sadang. it is very far from school I like Hanyang university. I want to study hard this semester.
As
you can see it is very simple and does not look like a paragraph. It
looks like poetry, but it isn't poetry. When writing you should always
use paragraphs. All books, newspapers, and magazines are written in
paragraphs. Also if you visit English communities you will notice that
everyone writes in paragraphs. Below is my introduction. You can see
that it is written in paragraphs. Please write all of your entries in
paragraphs.
Hi everyone,
My
name is Mr. Handsome, or James Bond, or Mr. Homework. But you can also
call me Sean. I'm from Canada and have been living in Seoul since 1997.
I have been teaching at Hanyang University since September 2005. Before
that I was teaching at Kookmin university and Seoul Women's University.
I
enjoy designing and building web sites (I have 5). My favorite drink is
Starbucks coffee and I go to starbucks every Saturday and Sunday to
read books and drink coffee. I'm married with one daughter and one son. I look
forward to reading your introductions.
I
do not like sports or being outside. I prefer to stay inside and read
books, work on my web sites, watch movies and play with my family. We
also play many board games at home. My favorite board game is Scrabble,
but I also like; monopoly, risk, & cranium. If I cannot play a
board game, I will play card games. Some of my favorite card games are;
hearts, cribbage, hand & foot, and poker.
Sean
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